Below are sample essays that I used for my application, (including my follow-on service proposal).
Statement
of Purpose Essay (7000 Character(s))
The Statement of
Purpose essay is a very important factor in the selection process. You should
carefully review your essay and ask an advisor to proofread your essay for
spelling, grammar, and content prior to submission. In the text box provided
below, please address the following questions, in no particular order. Be
specific in describing your individual reasons for studying abroad keeping in
mind that this is a scholarship for academic study abroad.
- Why do you wish to study or intern abroad and what factors led you to this decision? What do you hope to gain from and what do you anticipate will be the impact of your experience abroad?
- Describe your study or intern abroad program. What factors led you to select this program and length of study?
- Why have you chosen your country of study? What factors led you to select this country?
- How will this study or intern abroad program and the coursework you take abroad impact your academic and future professional goals?
- Are there any distinctive components to this program, beyond coursework, that will impact your overall learning experience abroad? (i.e. home-stays, internships, field research, volunteer activities, extra-curricular activities, etc.)
- What challenges, if any, did you face in your decision to study or intern abroad? How did you meet these challenges and what impact do you foresee them having on your experience abroad? These could include, but are not limited to, being a parent, being a non-traditional student, having a learning or physical disability, being in a field of study for which it is difficult to incorporate study abroad, etc.
As a
first-generation Chinese-American, there is a lot of pressure for me to succeed
and achieve more than my parents were able to. My parents had few opportunities
to follow their dreams because they were limited by the fact that they were
immigrants without a proper education. My uncle once described the bitter truth
about the older generation of Chinese immigrants—our parents and our
grandparents immigrated to chase after the American dream, only to find
themselves with merely two career options to choose from: either working in a
Chinese restaurant or a Chinese Laundromat. Though they were limited by their
career opportunities, one goal never changed: devoting their whole life and
earnings to support their family and create unlimited possibilities for the
future generations while giving up their own possibilities. Knowing that my
parents sacrificed a lot in order for me to have a proper education and climb
up the social pyramid, I was inspired to explore beyond my immediate
environment. I hope to travel as much as I can and learn about more various
career paths options before it’s too late. I also hope to obtain more
networking experience and become more comfortable interacting with new people
because networking on a professional level is important for career development.
The
main reason why I am applying for Seoul, South Korea is because I am intrigued
from what I have learned so far about Korean culture from watching Korean
television shows. I am also a fan of Korean music and cuisine. I really appreciate
how Koreans place emphasis on values of selflessness, generosity and family.
This is evident through careful meal preparations that often consist of
numerous side dishes, and the abundant servings at restaurants. I wanted to
choose a country that reminds me of home, and Korea’s value system aligned with
my expectations of a host country. I am confident that this welcoming attitude
will allow me to adapt to the environment more easily. I mentioned earlier
about my desire to explore different career paths—growing up, I have always had
a passion for cooking and learning about various cuisines. Though I am
currently majoring in accounting, I do envision myself possibly opening a
start-up in the food industry. As a long-term goal, one of the important
factors is really doing research and coming up with innovative ideas. Seoul is
the prime spot for trends, whether it is a fashion items or a simple street snack.
I want to take this opportunity to observe various trends of Korea and utilize
what I’ve learned to achieve my long-term goal after I return. My inspiration
comes from the recent trends in dessert pop-ups in New York City such as Hong
Kong style waffles served with ice cream and Thai-inspired ice cream rolls. There
is a limited exposure to Korean cuisine in the city, which is one thing I hope to
change. I want to raise awareness about other cultures by offering customers a
basic necessity—food.
This
leads me to challenges I faced as I was applying for study abroad. Aside from
the high costs of studying abroad, I was also unsure how to incorporate classes
that would relate to my major because my university does not allow me to take
core accounting courses at an international university. I plan on studying
international economics because I think it would be helpful to understand the global
economic view as a business major. Countries miles away from each other are tightly
knit together through international trade, the internet, and art. By studying
economics in a foreign country, I think it will offer a different perspective
than how economics would be taught in the United States. In addition to
economics, I plan on taking a psychology course for my minor. Studying this in
South Korea will be a unique experience because the news media culture Is very
different from New York’s. It will be interesting to explore the psychology
behind Korea’s celebrity culture and the drastic reactions of the public to
scandals. Aside from social psychology, there is also marketing psychology that
will be another fun topic to explore because Koreans invest in different industries
that we don’t regards as highly. Some examples are dermatology and
cosmetic/reconstructive surgery. I overcame my challenge by viewing the study
abroad experience as a cultural learning opportunity rather than as a direct
step to further my accounting career choice. As for finances, I plan on
borrowing a portion of the tuition and housing fee from my parents and then
paying for the traveling and food expenses myself. I think this is the best
solution because I can focus on saving up to invest in more activities to fund
my cultural curiosity. Though my academic career path in accounting will be
temporarily halted, the benefits of a unique cultural experience are far
greater than the cons.
Beyond
the coursework offered at Yonsei University, the program also offers weekend
field trips to various parts of Seoul that will impact my cultural learning
experience. Some of these field trips include touring traditional villages in
the city, visiting the the de-militarized zone at the border between North and
South Korea, and traveling to another province for the annual summer mud
festival. These field trips will be a great cultural learning experience
because I will not only learn about the political tension between North and
South Korea, but I can also explore the adventurous cultural events. These
trips will improve my cultural learning experience because I get to actively
participate in the cultural activities.
Lastly,
I am very excited about exploring Korea further because I admire how South
Korea balances their modern lifestyle with the more traditional neighborhoods
and breathtaking nature preservation. I have always been fascinated by the
stunning landscape and seemingly untouched gardens, waterfalls, and mountain
trails found in Asia. Unfortunately, since I was born and raised in New York
City, I did not have many chances to escape the busy city streets or experience
the tranquility of nature. By studying abroad in Korea, I hope to visit the farm
villages on the outskirts of the city or hike up Mount Halla. It will be a new
and exciting experience because in the New York, there is a larger focus on
constant economic growth and gentrification. As a result, a majority of older
buildings are often torn down and there are barely any reminisces of the past
American culture or history. In comparison, Korea really takes pride in their
history and puts in more effort to preserve their history and landscape. With
the growing environmental concerns for businesses in the U.S., I view my study
abroad experience as an opportunity bring back the knowledge I’ve learned
through Korea’s nature preservation to really help out and contributing to this
“green movement” whether it is contributing ideas for community service or
inspiring firms and students to make the change happen.
Follow-on
Service Project Proposal (7000 Character(s))
Should you be selected to receive a Gilman Scholarship, you will be required to carry out a Follow-on Service Project upon your return to the U.S. which promotes the Gilman Program and international education on your home campus and/or in your community. All applicants will be required to write a proposal explaining how you will give back by inspiring others to pursue their own experiences abroad. Projects should maximize the impact of your experience abroad by extending the benefits you received to your campus and community. Projects should be clear, able to be completed in approximately one semester, and have obtainable goals. Examples of Follow-on Service Projects can be found here. You should carefully review your essay and ask an advisor to proofread your essay for spelling, grammar and content prior to submission. Summarize your Follow-on Service Project Proposal in paragraph format by addressing the following questions.
Should you be selected to receive a Gilman Scholarship, you will be required to carry out a Follow-on Service Project upon your return to the U.S. which promotes the Gilman Program and international education on your home campus and/or in your community. All applicants will be required to write a proposal explaining how you will give back by inspiring others to pursue their own experiences abroad. Projects should maximize the impact of your experience abroad by extending the benefits you received to your campus and community. Projects should be clear, able to be completed in approximately one semester, and have obtainable goals. Examples of Follow-on Service Projects can be found here. You should carefully review your essay and ask an advisor to proofread your essay for spelling, grammar and content prior to submission. Summarize your Follow-on Service Project Proposal in paragraph format by addressing the following questions.
- Briefly outline your proposed project to promote the Gilman Scholarship and international education. How will this project impact your home university or home community? What are your project goals?
- What is your target population and how will your project impact this group?
- How will you integrate the impact of your experiences abroad into your project?
- What, if any, campus departments, student organizations, and/or community organizations will you collaborate with in promoting the Gilman Scholarship and international education? Have you already made contact with these groups?
- Upon completion of your project you will be required to submit a two-page final report summarizing your experience abroad and the impact of your Follow-on project.
My target population includes students from low-income families
who are interested in studying abroad (specifically in Asia), but are often
discouraged by the high costs. The purpose of my virtual guidebook and blogging
entries is to inspire students to apply to the non-traditional programs and
obtain an unforgettable experience. I often hear alumni from my home campus
talk about their regrets, and a common one is not taking the chance to study
abroad before starting full-time. I hope that by providing useful information
to complete their application process, more applicants will be motivated to
apply instead of having one more regret when they reflect upon their college
years. The main goal of my Follow-on Service Proposal is to minimize the
confusion for applicants and show that though the application process may be
tiring, the benefits of studying abroad and the experiences obtained there are
worth it in the end.
For my Follow-on Service Proposal, I plan to create a virtual
guidebook, for future applicants applying to non-traditional countries. During
my application process to Yonsei University, I encountered several obstacles
that I had to overcome without any guidance, such as figuring out how to pay
fees directly to the international university, or clarifying a specific section
of the application. Though my study abroad advisors provided a lot of helpful
feedback, there was a limitation to the intent in which they would be able to
walk the applicants through every step of their application process. That’s
when I realized, I want to provide that additional help for future applicants
who require immediate assistance. My goal is to offer answers to questions that
are missing from the Frequently Asked Question List on the Study Abroad Office
Website.
My projected plan is to implement multiple parts to virtual
guidebook—first, I will be documenting my own my application process. This
includes both the study abroad application for my home campus and my direct
enrollment application to the international university. I will be posting a detailed
step by step process that is versatile for multiple study abroad programs, not
just my own. I plan on working together with my study abroad advisors to ensure
that the information I am posting is correct. After confirming the information
for the first application with my study abroad advisors, I will branch off by
continuing with the steps I took for my direct enrollment process.
One of the major disadvantages of
applying for non-traditional countries is that it often requires a process that
is lengthy and confusing. My project goal is to reduce applicants’ stress by
listing the documents they will need to prepare in advance and tips for
ensuring that their paperwork is completed in time. One issue I faced was
figuring out how to pay the university for my direct enrollment application
fee. Thus another part of my guidebook will include information that I used—how
to complete foreign wiring transactions and a quick comparison analysis on bank
rates of common American banks. For low-income families, the main issue is
minimizing costs. I will include tips for how to save money for the trip (such
as by applying for scholarships), finding banks that are better for
international use, finding cheaper plane flights, etc.
Aside from the virtual journey from
the beginning of the application process to the packing for the actual flight,
I also want to share my experience studying abroad by uploading videos that
capture various activities I took part in. This will have a bigger impact on
motivating students to apply for studying abroad because they get to visualize
exactly what living in a foreign country will be like through my own
experiences. I hope that this can encourage them to visit non-traditional
countries for studying abroad, such as South Korea.
I will be coordinating with my study abroad advisor to figure out
ways to distribute a condensed brochure of my project proposal, such as at the study
abroad and scholarship fairs held on our campus every semester. These events
are great opportunities to promote the Gilman Scholarship and share my own
personal experiences. Another way is by sharing my project website directly via
organizations such as K-style to reach out to my target audience directly
because members of this organization are also interested in Korean culture. I
will be reaching out to these students via email. This list of students consists
those currently in my classes and members of the clubs I am associated with.
Process After Receiving Reward:
You have to login to the Gilman website again and fill out more information on how you wish to receive your scholarship (direct deposit/check), and also create an account for STEP (Safe Travel Enrollment Program) and fill out information about your travel/study abroad contact information.
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